Wednesday, March 25, 2009

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I know it can be tricky for some people to understand the difference between "it's" and "its" (even though it shouldn't be), but making that mistake on a napkin?? Come on.


The last sentence could also use a little work -- I suggest replacing "for" with "after," and "over" with "more than," so it reads, "And we are still serving the same great food after more than 50 years." Now doesn't that sound better?

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